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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Happy (07/12/07)

TITLE: Hi-Ho, Hi-Ho
By Sheri Gordon
07/18/07


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Snow White. Cinderella. Sleeping Beauty. Those were the princesses of my childhood. The princesses little girls pretended to be when we played dress-up and make-believe.

But, alas … long gone are my days of pretend. Princess fantasies are only distant memories. Prince Charming carried me off a quarter of a century ago, and is outside mowing the front lawn of our house in the suburbs – not a castle. My pumpkin-shaped carriage is a blue minivan, and my glass slippers are sparkly flip-flops.

While reality brought no fairy godmother to turn me into Cinderella, I am still part of a classic fairytale. No, I’m not Snow White, or Sleeping Beauty, or even the evil queen. (Don’t ask my kids to comment on that one.) I grew up to be the seven dwarfs.

The leader of the dwarfs is Doc. Now … I’m no licensed doctor, but all mothers acquire the title of Doc when their toddler begins to motor around the house. And, twenty years later, I’m still the resident doctor – having all varieties of bandages, ointments, wraps, compresses, and every over-the-counter drug ever made.

When stressed, Doc tends to get his words mixed up. I don’t know exactly when this phenomenon happened to me, but sometime between Little League and college applications, my thinking, and words, became confused. Some blame it on the teenage years, but Doc didn’t have any teenagers that I know of, so I’m still not entirely sure of the reason for this acquired disability.

Bashful does not like to be the center of attention. When the focus is on him, he turns beet red from the bottom of his neck through the top of his ears. I, too, have the ability to morph from a milky white complexion to a tomato red flush, with only the merest mention of my name. While blushing can be endearing, i.e. the blushing bride, for the most part it’s just annoying. And these days, I don’t blush only when I’m nervous or embarrassed; I blush for the sheer joy of blushing. I believe it’s affectionately referred to as “hot flashes.”

Sneezy has a severe case of environmental allergies. Me, too. Dust, furry animals, flowers … all of it. And neither Sneezy nor I have small, dainty sneezes. No, sir. At the first sign of ‘ah-ah,’ everyone in the vicinity assumes the old “duck-and-cover” position.

Sleepy? Yes – drooping bags under the eyes included. This started during my first pregnancy, subsided through the pre-adolescent years, and returned with a vengeance on our oldest child’s thirteenth birthday. I remember days gone by when I would rush home from the ball to beat the twelfth chime at midnight. Now, while my kids are primping to go out, I’m prepping for bed.

Dopey is the endearing dwarf. I always felt sorry for the little guy – like my kids feel sorry for me. He’s usually a little out of step, trips over nothing, and walks into walls. (I’m pretty sure this happened to me at the same time as the confused words.) And Dopey doesn’t know if he can talk. The reason? He never tried. How many things do I assume I can’t do because I’ve never tried?

Grumpy is more complex than initial appearances indicate. He’s suspicious of everything, and he doesn’t trust anyone. Grumpy’s motto: “Give ‘em an inch, they’ll walk all over ya’.” He’s always mad; huffing and stomping around to make sure everyone knows it. And he works very hard at being grumpy -- even trying to suppress a smile when he’s treated nicely.

Yet … Grumpy does care down inside. He cries hysterically when he thinks Snow White has died; and dances unashamedly when she wakes up. But, through it all, he insists on maintaining his Grumpy persona.

Too often I, too, protect my right to “grumpiness.” And while it’s funny in an animated character – it’s not so humorous in real life.

And what of the seventh dwarf? Happy. Am I that dwarf, too? Happy is always laughing. He finds joy in everything. (He doesn’t deny sorrow, however; crying when Snow White falls asleep.) Happy likes to sing and dance, even though he’s not very good at it.

I used to be Happy … but my “maturing” process squelched some of that unabashed Happy-ness. Why can’t I just bellyache laugh out loud and dance with abandon in public? Who says growing up means growing refined?

Today, I resolve to be all seven dwarfs. Starting now, I choose to be Happy, too.


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Dee Yoder 07/20/07
Absolutely love this entry! I can relate to (at this point in my life): Sleepy, Dopey, Grumpy, and especially, Bashful! (Maybe that's why I can relate to Grumpy!) I'll try my best to bring on Happy...depends on how much sleep I get...or maybe how high the air conditioner is set...Naw! I'll just give Happy a try for the sake of it-and everyone else in the household. Wonderful story. :) Love the title, too!
Seema Bagai 07/21/07
Wonderful! Enjoyed reading this unique blending of the fairy tale characters and real life.
Bliss Gordon07/21/07
So good! How creative and imaginative! I like this a lot! Thank you for sharing! =)
Joanne Sher 07/23/07
How fun! This was a delightful read. Love the voice, AND the wisdom!
Lynda Schultz 07/23/07
Absolutely love it! It's funny, but underneath is truth to be told. Very good.
Loren T. Lowery07/25/07
Wonderful entry and right on target in a "funtasmical" way. Great creativity and thought, and who would have ever guessed that all seven of those little critters live in each of us. Is that why we find them so endearing? Do you think Walt Disney knew this and that's one reason this story continues to entertain us all...just like yours has.
Verna Cole Mitchell 07/25/07
I love the creative metaphors you used for who you are. I guess I'm most like Dopey with some Happy thrown in. Good job.
Sara Harricharan 07/25/07
This is precious! I was smiling as I read through the whole thing and had to shake my head a few times because I was simply laughing too hard. You captured so much in here...and with the seven dwarfs too! This is certainly a fresh look on happy. Very creative-good job! ^_^
Kristen Hester07/25/07
I love this entry! I couldn't wait to read about each dwarf to see what clever thing you would say and see how you would relate it to yourself. It is witty, charming and profound all at once. Great job.
Dianne Janak08/01/07
I loved your creativity and imagination here and I could totally relate to you.. I laughed out loud in several parts and that is a joy for the comedy write! Thanks for the joy! Dianne