The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/08
I love love LOVE the voice of this! Great characterization, language, setting - EVERYTHING. This is just plain MASTERFUL.
02/08/08
Imaginative take on this topic. Love the man's realization that he knew more about people in history and entertainment than he did about Jesus.
02/11/08
What a wonderful way you found to illustrate, not only the proverb, but to teach an incomparable truth.
02/12/08
This was great--everything about it drew me in--the characters, the message, and the last sentence should make all who read it really think about their relationship with their Savior. Thanks for this wonderful story.
02/13/08
Thanks to Joanne's jewels, I got to read this wonderful entry. This may be my favorite this week. How creative and what a lesson, thanks for sharing this!
02/14/08
Congratulations on your EC. This is very good. Nice job with the topic.
02/14/08
Brilliant final sentence. Congrats on your EC placing. The line that made me wince? "I go to church and everything. I have a Bible.” How many people does that describe...
02/14/08
Congratulations, Stephanie! This was a very creative take on the topic!
Laury
02/14/08
Nicely done, Stephanie. Congrats on EC!!!!!!!!!!!
God bless.
02/14/08
Excellent! You crafted this superbly. Congratulations on your placement!