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10/11/07
Delightful story. We should gather like this more often—even when there isn't a snowstorm. Well done.
10/11/07
Wonderfully warm and inviting version of corporate worship. The characters are well developed. I could read many more stories of this kind!
A contender indeed! This one gets a blue ribbon from me. Loved every morsel. Yummy!
Great story. I agree we shouldn't wait for a snow storm to meet like this.
Where two or three are gathered together in His name, there He is in the midst of them. Can't get any better than that! Wonderful cozy story.
10/12/07
Wonderful characterization especially - and great descriptions. Wonderful piece!
10/12/07
I enjoyed this story thoroughly. The characters were great!
I loved your "snowed-in worship" story. The characterization was great.
10/14/07
Super Job! Loved it.
10/14/07
Creative concept. Great job. God bless.
I loved this. Glad I read it. Good one to go to sleep on.
10/15/07
Brrrrrrr, I'm not ready to read snowy stories! But this was a delightful read, in every way.
10/17/07
Well written description of one very worthy way to worship. We don't have to be in a church building, but we do have to worship. I love the way they did it.
10/17/07
How cool -- different denominations worshiping together! Nice...
Laury
This was great - a wonderful example of unity in spite of denominational differences.
I liked your story of worship.....it kept me from beginning to end.
10/17/07
I like Mrs. Parsons. Wonderful story of what church is supposed to be about. Good job!