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06/13/08
I love all the personalities, and the humor throughout this delightful piece. Enjoyed this immensely!
06/14/08
Good going with your gaggle of alliteration. Your gang of geese were great fun.
Oh my giddy giggles! What a fun story. I loved the "I must have put on a few pounds this winter". Just as well it isn't Christmas :- )

This was very well done, especially the attributing human traits to the geese, very well done Yvonne.
06/16/08
Very cute! I love the alliteration of the names, too. Fun story.
06/17/08
I love watching the geese come north again in the Spring and love the personalities you created in this lovely story!
06/21/08
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.
This was outstanding! I loved it.