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TITLE: With Love from your Bride-to-Be | Previous Challenge Entry
By Benjamin Graber
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I’ve been in pain quite often lately:
My arm’s been feeling out of joint,
My foot’s been bruised by rocky roads,
My back has offered its complaint—
There have been times, my gallant hero
I wish your healing touch was here,
The moments when the barbs of pain
Would leave my heart with doubts and fear—
My heart is churned by every ache
And I confess, I often lose
The sight of all you mean to me
In what I have been wrestling through—
But I have found that in the moments
Your love was foremost on my mind
The pain and troubles disappear
As if my love has made me blind—
My members all are joined together
When every thought is turned to you;
I rest in perfect harmony
When I can keep our dreams in view—
And now I see, in times of pain,
If I remember all you’ve done
Your love performs a miracle
As all my parts are bound as one.
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When I can keep our dreams in view—
Like that line. This was a thought-provoking poem.
Laury
I so enjoyed this!
"My precious bride, the day is nearing
when I'll take you in my arms and hold you.
I know there's been a lot of things that you've been hearing, but you just hold on to what I have told you..."
Lovely word pictures in this poem.