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Topic: Write in the ADVENTURE genre (05/24/07)
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TITLE: Now That Is a Great Adventure! | Previous Challenge Entry
By Verna Cole Mitchell
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But bumping and bruising
And falling down
And getting up again,
Yet knowing every day
That the God
Of all the universe
Is watching over you.
Now that is a great adventure!
And what is getting married
But bumping and bruising
And falling down
And getting up again together,
Yet knowing every day
That the God
Of all the universe
Is watching over you both.
Now that is a great adventure!
And what is having children
But watching them bump and bruise
And fall down
And get up again,
Yet, knowing every day
That the God
Of all the Universe
Is watching over them.
Now that is a great adventure!
And what is growing old,
But bumping and bruising
And falling down
And sometimes getting up again,
Still knowing every day
That the God
Of all the Universe
Is watching over you.
Now that is a great adventure!
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Great use of repetition; I really enjoyed this one!
Well done!
Beautiful poem! I LOVE it!!! There truly is nothing more exciting than living life for God, day to day dependent on Him for everything. Blessings, Cheri
Good job, Verna!