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TITLE: Eternity in Moments | Previous Challenge Entry
By Rachel Phelps
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long after the moment
of its inception
past time
past thought
past impression?
A word.
Concept to action
flung forth
Communication
Brings forth
creation
comprehension
contemplation
change
“Let there be...”
“Surely this man...”
“I live by faith...”
Past sound.
Past moment.
Words. Eternal.
What extends
long after the moment
of its inception
past fear
past moment
past consequences?
A choice.
Idea to conclusion
Internal shift
Decision
Brings forth
Peace
Perspective
Passion
Purpose
“I do...”
“I will not...”
“I am not ashamed...”
Past impulse.
Past moment.
Choices. Eternal.
What exists
long after the moment
of its inception
past mind
past humanity
past intuition?
An idea.
Seed to fruit
Philosophic action
Inspiration
Brings forth
Learning
Liberation
Life
Love
Freedom.
Justice.
Redemption.
Past sound.
Past moment.
Ideas. Eternal.
What extends
long past the moment
of its inception
past fear
past hate
past consequences?
A love.
Divine to mortal
God's wellspring
Reconciliation.
Brings forth
Ideas
Choices
Words
Actions
Creation
Salvation
Communion
past sound
past moment
past mental breadth
past earthly time
past human capacity.
God's infinite love. Eternal.
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As the pace started rolling, everything was seamless. Awesome job!
Since you requested red ink, a small dab would relate to your view of infinity or eternity as unending; when by definition it has no beginning either.
So easy to get our heads around that one - I don't think.
That to say that this is totally awesome. :)
I love how you tied all the eternal moments together with one ... LOVE. God's love is definitely the most powerful, the most eternal force in existence. Awesomely done!