The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/13
I like the contrasting sounds of the bells as you depict bad behavior and good behavior. Clever idea. I think a colon after the introductory sentence of each poetic paragraph would have been helpful to the rhythm of this piece. Other than that, I enjoyed this entry.
05/24/13
A great poem, I love this. What huge truth to contemplate here. Thankyou.
05/24/13
A challenging message that suddenly emerges through very simple language.
05/24/13
Enlightening and meaningful. I enjoyed this precious poem. Thank you.

God bless~
05/28/13
I love this, and I love the creativity, in that you can read it backwards also. Nice job.
05/30/13
I enjoyed your poem, and love the fact you can read it both ways. Great job!
Congratulations for ranking 9 in your level and 12 overall!