The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/13
This is a touching story that takes me through the sadness into the light again. A unique take on the topic too. Well done.
05/24/13
A very well-earthed picture of adjusting to grief, and how God uses so many different people in different ways to express his grace. And "Pansies at Your Door" - what a beautiful idea! I hope that it's not just for this story alone.
05/24/13
"Blessed are those who mourn for they shall be comforted..." jumped right out at me in this tender story. What a fabulous idea of the pansies at the door...I pray that this is an actual event, and if not, I am going to suggest it happen at our church!

Thank you for this story.

God bless~
05/24/13
Your story is gripping, moving and extremely well-written. It rings true to how some deal with grief. The ending is touching and uplifting. Well done!
05/31/13
Terrific characterization of your MC's avoidance antics.It was an enjoyable read and the ending was priceless.