The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/09
I could see the Rockies—very nice!
02/06/09
Very well written. I love it when a writer paints a picture while sparingly using words. The cloud "family" idea is sweet.
Mona
02/06/09
Just beautiful and delightful. Wonderful rhythm to this, and lovely descriptions. Enjoyed this very much.
I loved the imagery.
02/09/09
I liked how you used the perspective of the clouds to tell the beauty of the land. Creative and clever.
02/09/09
How clever! I wish I knew how to write poetry like this, with delightful word pictures and telling a charming story. I loved this.
02/09/09
Makes me want to take a road trip!
Well done....I enjoyed this poem very much. :)
Aww...what a fun perspective! I enjoyed the cloud's eye view. :)
02/10/09
This is great! What an awesome picture for us visual learners. Good job!
02/11/09
I love good poetry so of course I love this one. The simple story supplies the structure for beautiful Canadian sight-seeing. Well done.
02/11/09
This was awesome - you may be tempting me to truly love poetry!
02/11/09
Awww! This just registed on the adorable scale! lol. I enjoyed it. My favorite line in particular was where the baby clouds slept. What a neat image. Loved this! ^_^
What a creatively clever approach! Excellent.