The Official Writing Challenge
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Masterfully written! This is great!
09/16/06
Very nice personalization of the Garden scene. Very well written! :)
09/16/06
I'm not a fan of fiction and rarely read it, but this was touching. Nicely done.
09/17/06
Great story. Can you imagine if someone could have known exactly what was going on that night and understood it all?? Yes, I see you can imagine it - and shared it very nicely with us. Good work!
09/20/06
What a revealing look at His garden from from another perspective. Excellent writing, excellent story. I enjoyed this so very much. Blessings Brenda
09/21/06
I also wonder how many people watching on that night and following really understood why Jesus had to die - what a wonderful perspective, and telling, of this so familiar story in a totally different angle. I enjoyed this very much!
04/04/07
You truly have a gift here that you are definitely cultivating. This was creative and so well done.