The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/11
Very clever rug-puller to close. Well done.
01/15/11
a funny conversation I could picture the characters all denying their role in the " sour notes"
01/15/11
Your dialog is believable and your story has plenty of tension as well as humor. Good job.
01/17/11
Very, very clever! I enjoyed this greatly!
Enjoyed this clever, jazzy tale. Very nicely done.
01/17/11
Clever, fun, and I loved the snappy dialogue. Great entry!
01/17/11
So cleverly done, the final line surprised me. Nicely written.
Good dialogue--I felt like I was eavesdropping.
01/19/11
Ah, clever with an I-didn't-see-it-coming punch line.
This was a cute play of words on the topic and left me with a smile.