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For further study: Luke 6:33-36
“Are you ready to go?” Mamma anxiously asked, for it was our first visit. Last Sunday, we were asked to join their rest home ministry. “As ready as I will be,” I said a little reluctantly. I wasn’t sure what to expect so it felt like Momma was pulling me out the door leaving some of my fingernails behind in the walls.
When we entered the common room, there were many of the residents already waiting for us. Everyone was very friendly, except for one little old man. I sat down beside him, while Momma mingled with some people she knew. He asked me if I was with the group that usually came on Wednesday night. When I told him I was, he immediately tried to poke holes in my faith. He seemed to be a scholar in all things Biblical, but the head knowledge hadn’t penetrated his heart. This little man was the perfect example of claiming to be wise, they became fools. (Romans 1:22)
The little man’s sharp criticisms held many people at bay. Some even started avoiding him. But I continued to talk to him and push his wheelchair wherever he needed to go. The only time he didn’t complain about something was when the hymns were being sung. He would listen with a far away glint in his eye. Eventually, this little man was saved; the off-key hymns helped touch a memory in his hard heart.
Most Christians live to go the ball games, dances, work, all the activities of a healthy life. But part of a healthy life is to be a blessing to others. It is so easy to be a blessing to others who can be a blessing back, but that is ordinary. We are called to be out of the ordinary, Holy Spirit led. I enjoyed my time with the sharp little man; he was a blessing to me as much as I was to him. That is the way blessings turn. You start being a blessing to someone who can’t return the blessing, but you come away with so much joy. Are you ready to be a blessing? Are you ready to get out of your comfort zone? Join a group that is already being a blessing; that is the easiest way. Once you start, you won’t stop.
“Out in the highways and byways of life,
Many are weary and sad;
Carry the sunshine where darkness is rife,
Making the sorrowing glad.
Make me a blessing,
Make me a blessing,
Out of my life may Jesus shine;
Make me a blessing,
O Saviour, I pray
Make me a blessing to someone today.”
George S. Schuler, lyrics to the hymn “Make Me a Blessing”
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Your devotional had a good message. It would have been even better if you would have more dialogue showing, instead of telling about the experience with the older gentlemen.
God bless~
The only suggestions I might offer would be to end with a prayer. Also, you may have done this, but before you quote any lyrics make sure they are in the public domain. Many of the older hymns are, but I'm not familiar with the one you used.
I think you did a nice job of summing up your message. I think if you polish this sum, and follow the writer's guidelines it would be perfect for a devotional magazine like The Upper Room (Except instead of asking the you questions, I would put it under the Thought for the Day part like this: how can I step out of my comfort zone today and be a blessing to others?) If you do a search, The Upper Room has its guidelines and submission directions on their website. Congratulations on ranking 13th in level one!