The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting story. You intrigued me immediately with the opening line. Although I have felt and heard Jesus whisper to me, and I believe it all possible, it was tied up a bit too neatly too fast. Some of the transitions were sudden and some proofing and editing would smooth it out. I enjoyed the take on the topic. You definitely have a passion for spreading the Word. Your message is one of hope and is one the world needs desperately right now. Good job.