The Official Writing Challenge
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12/18/22
A great testimony of God's faithfulness.

Keep writing.
This is a great story. I enjoyed the conflict and the fresh take on the topic. The beginning was a bit long. It took a bit to pull me in. Instead of the back story, maybe show some of it with dialog, body language, and thought. The second half picked up quite a bit and you did a fine job of doing more showing than telling. The message is an important one and I really enjoyed the Scripture you used. Good job.
I loved this entry!
There were more than just words on a page here.
I heard God’s whisper.
Great job.
I read the feedback from the other contributors and enjoyed them too. Great advice.