The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed how you compared this season of pain with the creation of a pearl, it is very apt. Well done~~~~
04/29/22
A very creative story. Kept me engaged until the end. Many parents live with regret, or blame themselves when their children go astray. Successful parenting can only happen when we lean on God.

Some constructive feedback: there were some minor verb tense issues in the beginning.
04/30/22
A heartfelt account of how God releases his mercy in our mess - and I also loved that picture of the pearl emerging at the end.
A story with real issues and God's mercy and forgiveness
Lovely heartwarming story. Great aspect on pain. I too noticed a few irregularities in tenses, but I wrestle continually with them in my own stories🤔. I have no idea how to juggle them and I’m caught wondering how long you spend on the great storyline versus grammar? I seem to spend equal sweat on both-and does it matter? I guess it does. I think the judges mark for both.
This is a powerful testimony that touches on many important things. You did a great job of writing on topic while giving a powerful message.
05/05/22
Shanta, this story is a "pearl." Thank you for blessing us with your words.