The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/06
Interesting.
06/02/06
A 'word artist' - I like that. This is good, but it seems to have some overexplaining (w/Jenny & Jordan). Overall, I like the message and the way you put words together.
06/03/06
The Title drew me in - but then I got bogged down in the life story of a Wordsmith searching for a purpose; I guess the title had promised me the unusual and so was disappointed, but beautifully expressed - and nicely witten.
I liked your title too. I had a hard time following the different bird connections. But, I liked the ending on how we are all swans headed for that silver lake.
06/05/06
I like this, even though it took me a few lines to get a feel for your story and where it was heading. You wrapped it up quite satisfactorily at the end, leaving this reader looking forward to more from your pen.
06/09/06
What a fun piece! I love the bird theme woven throughout. Great job.