The Official Writing Challenge
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You have some great examples in this Bible study. Instead of quoting the verses word for word, try retelling it in your own words to help connect with the reader. A good percentage of what you wrote are direct quotes from the Bible instead of original words and your thoughts of how they inspired you. A tiny thing that is a pet peeve of mine is using the word that instead of who (They were friends who loved--not that loved). It's a tiny thing, but one I tend to notice. I can feel your passion to write and spread the Word of God. Nice take on the verse topic too, with a pertinent message.