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I like the intro. Appropriate story and also the dramatic entry and the revealing of the baby.
11/30/21
I love Biblical reference stories, Well done!
BLessings~
You did a great job of retelling this story. You pulled me in right away and held me to the very end.
You've handled a complicated section of Biblical history well. I really enjoyed having it fleshed out.