The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/21
Your entry was received well, giving us much to appreciate with the beauty of each season. You seemed to go from one tense to another in paragraph two. I appreciate your entry.
08/07/21
Thank you. I imagined the beauty and sheer joy of your surroundings of nature, peace and quiet you have written about.

Blessings!

08/11/21
A small typo at the end:
'for a our actions.'

I really enjoyed all the detail in your entry and yes, we've kind of made a mess of a lot of things...

But God!
08/12/21
You have a great eye for taking the beauty of all four seasons to heart. You also have a gift for putting it into writing. You started with a masterful description of winter and carried it through quite well, but the full circle transition back to winter was a little choppy. It didn’t seem to have a smooth flow.
All in all, “well done”. You expressed your point of view with passion and surprised me with the challenge topic at the end of your article.
08/17/21
I enjoyed your writing. I could picture myself, sitting with you enjoying God's beautiful world.

And the concern about what man is doing to our earth.
08/19/21
Masterful description of your surroundings and good points made about our responsibility.