The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/14
I’d love to have your input into the free writing lessons available on the FaithWriters forums. This week’s lesson is on writing devotionals, and next week will cover writing on topic for the weekly challenge. Look for it at http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67, or if you’re on Facebook, you can “like” Faithwriters Writing Lessons.
01/10/14
Quite a thrilling read! Nice job with the topic.

God bless~
01/10/14
I enjoyed this entry very much, probably because I'm a nature lover! I had fun discovering what Mayapples, trilliums, and Red salamanders were. It was as if I was there enjoying the great outdoors.
01/11/14
What fascinating events leading up to your day's end. My granddaughter is part Seneca Indian as my son is half. They are a proud and noble nation. You describe the rock and landscape very well. A great job on this one.
01/11/14
Beautifully descriptive, with many, many wonderful phrases and depictions of the natural surroundings.

My personal preference would be to have more descriptions of you during your climb--you had some of that, but I believe you'd do well to really help your reader to feel the things you felt as your climbed and then descended.

Outstanding writing!
01/16/14
Ah the adrenalin and wonder induced by the dizzying beauty of sites such as this. I haven't yet made it to this gorgeous place, but it is on my list. I've done a good bit of climbing, especially in the Rockies. Keep on writing and share more adventures!
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