The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/25
You've included some clear insights and solid questions about a familiar bible story. However, there's a minor slip up as you've switched from past tense into present tense as you wrap it up. An easy mistake to make, but we all make them. God bless you as your writing ministry develops
You make some great points. I like the example you gave. One thing you might want to consider is sentence structure. If you go back and count how many sentences start with Sampson, I think you might be surprised. Some tightening and restructing can make a huge difference. I can feel your passion in your words and your desire to spread the Word with your reader.