The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/25
Well written account that flows with nostalgia, before you lift the mood by throwing in some hope. I like the neat repetitive touch as you wrap up each para.
03/04/25
I really liked your poetic prose repeated throughout this piece. It is definitely something to think about--something like actually forming relationships with your neighbors instead of hiding inside.
I really enjoyed this. I could relate to the fear and loneliness. Although you use the topic word in a sentence, the entire piece isn't about the topic. If I didn't know the topic, I'd guess it was porch or maybe hope. I liked your opening. It pulled me in and made me smile. I could feel your desire and passion as I read. I also think you had a clear message. Keep writing and reading and commenting on other entries.