The Official Writing Challenge
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So well done. Love the eternal message you've wrapped within today’s culture.
I hope it does well.
08/25/23
Love the use of the movie to lead into a teaching moment for this mom with her daughter.
08/25/23
Love the use of the movie to lead into a teaching moment for this mom with her daughter.
08/29/23
This is good. The only tweaks I would suggest is you can lose almost every tag line with an action. It also helps break up the dialog. The use of dialog is very powerful in a story and I appreciated yours very much.