The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely laid discourse and on topic.
I too agree that the dream of equality within the world system is not going to happen.
But Jesus is Lord ?‍??
This is well said. Equality in a sinful world is foolish. We forget that this world's wisdom is foolishness to God.
08/25/23
Nicely written. I enjoyed reading your words!
08/28/23
The message here is well presented. However, it is all telling and no showing. To write a memorable piece, put the reader into the scene. Show the reader Matthew's response, the disciples' disbelief, the public's distain, etc. Help the reader smell the dusty streets, the savory food cooked, etc. Get into the scene and pull your audience in with you!