The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your take on the topic. It was interesting and you made some great points. Be aware of when you are quoting directly from Bible and paraphrasing. It was hard to differentiate. You could use end notes to reference the paraphrase and include the location of verse in the end. With direct quotes, make sure you include the translation you use as well. Be consistent with your punctuation too. You have a strong message and a good take on the topic.
06/03/22
A marvelous take on the result/outcome/sanctification/fruit of God's work in our lives-- as we serve and love Him and walk closer with Him-- through His Holy Spirit.

I'm blessed and inspired! Thank you.