The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a nice job of presenting an interesting article with some great Scripture connections. The opening paragraph intrigued me and pulled me in right away. One thing I might suggest is perhaps some out-of-the-box take on the story. I liked the idea you presented in the opening and could see you expanding even more on that concept. You have a clear message and you did a fine job of writing on topic.
06/03/22
The first man and woman chose first from the tree of fruit of knowledge over the tree of fruit of Life. Before they could repent, pick, eat the fruit from the Tree of Life and live for ever, they were banished from the Garden. Genesis 3:22-24.

Thank you for the concept of the "forbidden fruit" you have put forth in your challenge entry.

Good job.
A good take on the topic