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10/21/21
What a lovely, well-written piece. You immersed me in the emotional tension leading up to her rescue and the subsequent relief that she was safe. That ability is the mark of a wonderful storyteller. Well done!
I am so glad that God generously sent people to help rescue you. I hope your brothers were able to reach freedom as well.
10/24/21
Awesome! What courage displayed to walk out of abuse. Yes, our Lord and Saviour provided. Keep on, keeping on! God bless you.
Wonderful testimony and nicely written. Pay it forward one day- as they say.🙏
10/28/21
What a lovely story. My only suggestion is to write more active that would give added punch to the story. Keep up the good work!