The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/21
Lovely absolutely lovely. Thank you!
10/28/21
This is a sweet story, filled with potential. A few suggestions: I found the hook a little difficult to follow. Could be from trying to include too many details. Also, learn to format for Quote marks to mark dialog rather than italics as that usually denotes internal dialog. I LOVE dialog and you handled yours with great creativity.