The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/21
I hope this situation comes to a good resolution. Yes, prayer is a great solution.
08/06/21
This was an interesting take on the challenge word of the week. If this is a true account, I do hope your friend and her husband have been blessed by the Lord. I did find your entry to be a little distracting in that you did not use spacing in between most paragraphs. Also, the spelling you used for the main Bible verse is spelled G-A-L-A-T-I-A-N-S. I thought your approach to the challenge was a unique one and wasn't one that was the same as someone else's God bless!
08/08/21
It seems as though the problem is shared between the people you mention. Keep praying for your circumstances
Remember that Jesus would have died for you even if you were the only person in the world. He loves you that much.
If you are considering further writing, apply the good comments already given above - they will be very helpful.
08/09/21
Prayer is your most powerful weapon. Assuming your friend has been captivated by a cult could be harmful if she were to reach out to you again.

Preconcieved notions are usually not helpful. And back to your entry, spacing between your paragraphs would be helpful.
08/11/21
Prayer is powerful. The more I pray the more I am learning how to pray.

It has been mentioned a couple of times about spacing between paragraphs.

Thank you for your entry.
08/12/21
This topic is indeed unique. The hook is fantastic. However, there is a great deal of "telling" in the story and very little "showing." Keep writing with this in mind and you will turn out stellar articles!