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07/11/05
Excellent devotional thoughts & words. I heartily agree. Thank you for the reminder.
I enjoyed your deep thoughts. Nice flow.
07/15/05
Yes, he sure did. Nice thoughts, thank you for sharing them with us.
God bless, littlelight
07/15/05
Some very good truths in this. Very good points, we do have it to easy in our modern society.
Good admonition. My favorite line: "The temporary abundance of the industrialized world has fooled us into thinking that we are in control." Thanks for this reminder!
07/16/05
This was done SO well; great insights, good teachings. :0)
07/18/05
This is nice. But I would so much prefer to see you presetn this same subject, the same scene, through a real time story where you introduce the elements through the actions. (Showing, not telling) For example: I walked to the beach. The baranacles on the rocks gouged my feet as I picked my way to the waterline...... etc. You've obviously got talent. Let's see it presented a bit differently. :-)