The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/16
I do not usually comment on poems. I will say you covered the topic and you showed Jesus as a social person.

Thanks and keep writing.
04/14/16
This poem covered the topic well. I was a little lost near the end, but your last stanza summarized the meaning well.
04/15/16
Great job! Well done.

Blessings~
I enjoyed the thought of the poem throughout.

In whatever situation we find ourselves, we should consider other's needs.

Nice writing.
04/17/16
I thought this poem covered the topic very well.

I thought the poem's transition from Jesus being social to being left alone needed to be more developed.

It was a good reminder to us that Jesus is always near.
This is quite lovely. I think the rhymes were nice, and I enjoyed the journey through the Bible.
04/21/16
Congratulations, Grace, on your highly commendable poem in the Beginners category. I look forward to reading more of your work.
04/21/16
Congrats!

Blessings~