The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/14
I really enjoyed this, it can be so hard for God to break through into our modern overloaded lives. Also my children would see no problem with paying with elastic bands, or loom bands as the fad is now.
I was going to say, I wonder if dividing it into paragraphs might make it read more easily, but then I realized that the block of text is exactly like the procession of thoughts that you describe.

Thank God for His way of sending those little messages of peace.
10/11/14
Oh this beautiful and truthful piece of writing touched my heart big time!

I loved how your words unfolded reality of the "world" and distractions. The segue that lead into the infinite love of communing and being with the Sovereign God, enveloped in a dance that transcends time.

Excellent! One of my favorites this week!

God bless~
10/15/14
I love this, you have captured what many are going through, the never ending worries of life and you ended it with such sweetness; dancing with our Lord.

What a wonderful reminder for us all.