The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/09
Hmmmm. Some interesing imagery here...

I wish I understood it!

I read it twice, and it's a clever poem, enjoyable to read...just a bit beyond me, I guess.
06/03/09
I quite liked the idea and the poem but there was too much left and right etc not much light and dark AND if it was a riddle and there was a three word answer you should have put it in the last line. I looked there to find it. If it was GOD then make it clear!