The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Good job with the topic.

I'm not sure if you meant "Assignation" in your title, or "Assassination" (as you have it in your last sentence). Something you might want to clarify...

These are words that we should all take to heart.
01/15/08
Whew! What a long title!
Good message, but a little hard to read. Break for each new speaker or thought with an extra space/line.
Good job...keep writing.
01/20/08
Really liked your story. Break your thoughts into a few paragraphs easier for reading. You have a great message keep writing.