The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/07
I enjoyed the dialogue in this--both sisters came to life in their conversation. Very moving. Was also drawn in by the title--anything with a personal name sparks my curiosity!
A bit of nostalgia and a calling to work for the Lord too. Thanks
02/17/07
This is so sweet and heartwarming. A bit of work on punctuation would polish this up - but I LOVED it nonetheless.