The Official Writing Challenge
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06/26/06
Good message in here, but it took a couple of readings. Some of your sentences are run on and repetitive (see this sentence: The rosary came from ..), and (Did you ever get a gift from a person you so treasured but had not met for so long) should be reworded for clarity. You have a nice style so keep at it. :)