The Official Writing Challenge
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A very thoughtful piece, with a nice, clear style.

I'm picking up a very deep sensitivity in you as an author, but there's a sense that you're holding back a little bit. Your list of things that touch you in God's creation is keenly observant, but again, I'm hungry for some emotion, for how things truly affect you at the gut level. How will you grab me, the reader, at the core of me, and compel me to keep reading?

One exercise that has helped me is to just start writing, whatever comes, without editing as I go. That brings my deep places to the surface. I can be as crazy or senseless as I want. Let it all out on paper (sometimes a pen is easier for this than a computer), and forget about what the judges will see until your final edit. It will amaze you what gems will surface!

Keep writing! You've got a wonderful gift in there!