The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/05
WOW! thr entire pie.
This is a very good story.
Why so short?
12/12/05
Sounds tiring, but fun! Expand your story by recounting your adventures as you traveled up the mountain.
12/13/05
When you expand this (and I hope you do), consider making an object lesson about following the white dots on the trees.