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Topic: Blog (10/20/11)
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By Barbara Miller
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Blog about the fog
Blog about the kids with their Labradoodle dog
Talking on paper like a diary in a way
Writing of family life for the family far away
It means a lot to you and to them it means much more
But for us who follow blogs it reads nothing but a bore
It can be all for fun but not fun for all
A choice must be made to read some at all
Give me blogs with humor with insights into life
How doin' things the wrong way can turn out to be right
Or cooking with real butter makes lighter into like
Stories for sake of stories is not my cup of tea
Unless of course I really am your precious Aunt Bee
So blog on about this or blah blog on about that
Just saying it's only some that keep me comin' back
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2. Point of view was creative
3. As noted, a few commas would help the reader. As you continue writing, you'll discover how to avoid the sing song rhyming in poetry.
(I fall into that a lot).:-)
4.Great start. 5.A few rough edges in the beat, but mostly well done. Loved your play on words. "all for fun, fun for all."