The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/05
Nice story, well written. Thank you for sharing--I felt the heat! and relief! God bless ya, littlelight
07/28/05
I could feel the heat in the last car I had without air conditioning... Never again! Good story.
Fun travelogue with a unique format! The "reality check" of the trip seems to be that awesome memories are formed in the midst of less-that-perfect circumstances.