The Official Writing Challenge
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Too easy to think of drinking the cup of salvation just once - as for the cup of suffering ...who knew it was one and the same.
Yes we must drink everyday.
Beautifully put. Thankyou
I am touched by the imagery of the somewhat tattered armor and the cautious sips on some days.
Nicely written and enjoyable.
The passion in your voice exudes compassion and love. Well put for sure. If you could find a buddy to go through some of the punctuation that would just give it that much more excellence.

I think your writing is very, very good. :)
I'm still learning, too, so bear with me...

My only 'negative' comment is that I'm not sure it's on topic as is, but I could see it modified to include sharing this faith you express.

That being said, your piece moved me. I REALLY enjoyed reading it. I would like to know your name and follow your writing when possible, please.
Oh! I forgot to say I LOVED the part 'Yes, as recent as...'

It is so true to real least I can relate!
I like your voice here--the sentence fragments make this almost poetic.

Be careful of using tenses and punctuation properly.

Lovely, lyrical writing.