The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 773 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
04/20/07
A cute way to elaborate on that classic joke! Poor fella. Good pacing, this reads like a comedy routine, snappy.
I can't wait to share this one with my eleven year old. In theatre lingo, we call this, "good timing."
Really cute! Suprise ending was great.
Awesome story. I have heard that joke about puzzels before but you ran with it and made a great story out of it! Great job! I loved the "enthusiasim" (sp) of the kids, sound just like mine!