The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/07
I loved this story! Terrific dialogue--all the characters came to life and the creativity and warmth of this homeschooling (?)family completely delighted me! I felt as though I were right there with them.

Was a little confused by the mix of "Charlie" with "Mrs. McGyver"--were they both the parents? Wondered why they were referred to by different titles(?).

Loved the offbeat, colorful title of this story--it grabbed me right away. Great job!
02/16/07
Very cute, I would like to read more about Cindy's adventures. Good job! :)
Cute story.I didn't realize about the home schooling intil reading the comments though. Makes it a little more clear to me now.
02/20/07
Very cute title and a cute story to match it. I enjoyed the picture that you created. Nice work