The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/07
thanks for the reminder that God sees something in us that remains hidden from our sight.
02/18/07
A wonderful extended metaphor! So much truth in such a brief piece...I've been crafted, that's for sure, and I can really relate to this.

A very small thing--in one sentence you leave the "craftsman" metaphor and compare God to a gem. Just a little disorienting, and perhaps best to stick with the one comparison, which you do so very well in this devotional.
02/20/07
You packed a lot of truth into such a short story. Keep writing!