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TITLE: The 23rd Psalm | Previous Challenge Entry
By DeWayne Bricker
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
It matters not what
Be it cold
Or be it hot
I walk
He’s there too
Yes with me
And with you
Through the valley
Dark and deep
In his watch
Yes He’ll keep
Of the shadow
Unseen fear
In His hand
Holds me near
Of death
It’s cold breath stings
Yet His words
In my ear doth rings
I will fear
Demon nor man
Beast nor plague
My God can
No evil
Shall hurt me
And all things
Must flee
For You
Lift me up
And You
Fill my cup
Are with me
To carry my heart
Over the hills
You’ll never part
Your rod
True and strong
Guides my life
All day long
And your staff
A map for me
Also a light
To help me see
They comfort me
As I fight
And direct my path
Back to the light
Back to
The mountain top
Without fear
I’ll not stop
Without you O Lord
I will do right
I’ll run the race
I’ll fight the fight
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Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
Take a look at your 5th stanza--there's an unnecessary apostrophe, and some problems with verbs.
This is a very clever poem!