The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/06
Interesting
I liked it. But I especially liked the parts when you really focused on the despair we feel when we don't know enough about that man on the cross and what he did for us.

08/18/06
Very good progression in this poem. Tighten it up a bit for meter and tense, and it'll be super.
08/18/06
Beautiful piece!
08/18/06
very nicely done.
08/19/06
Very good. I enjoyed this poem. In Christ's Love,

Julia
08/19/06
I enjoyed this poem. We've all been in a valley like this, filled with despair. I love how our Father comes to our rescue! I really respect your efforts. I could no more write poetry, at this time, than an elephant could tie his shoes....if he had any!
Very nice. Enjoyed the easy rhythm of each stanza.