The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/15
Beautiful, lyrical poem.
08/16/15
I could feel the excitement with the announcement "Sun's out". You painted the scene perfectly. I loved your ending message that figuratively announced the "sun's out" (this time for the reader to see beyond the shadows and fog of this life). Excellent work! <3
08/16/15
A most enjoyable and uplifting poem. I liked the line: "Totally worth the journey and the wait,' in both its aspects. Lovely writing.
08/17/15
Your descriptions are so vivid! I was drawn into a wilderness experience, feeling like I was along for the ride. Great stuff:)
08/20/15
Engrossingly descriptive, with a great analogy in your close.
08/20/15
"Sun's out!" I love that line. It certainly was the climax of the suspense that was building. Well done!
Congratulations on ranking 13th overall!