The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/12
Simply beautiful...truly. Great job. God bless~
04/15/12
Lovely and meaningful. I love the parallelism. Thank you.
04/16/12
Well done. I particularily like the part:
Blue for baptism, the public declaration
Of independence
From death.
04/16/12
This free verse is pregnant with poignancy. Yes, there is the most wonderful freedom, for us all, that comes through Jesus!
Thanks for your meaningful and lovely piece.
This is so beautiful. I loved how how showed the different colors and their meanings. I was also impressed with the comparison of Independence day with Easter. There have been so many entries about Easter this week but your POV was creative and fresh.
04/17/12
I always find a good comparison helps to bring across the 'point'. this one certainly did.
Excellent analogy in your poem
Congratulations for ranking 17th overall!