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I really liked the way you put us in the MC's mind. The confession, regret, fear, angst all seemed so real. And, the way it all played out was not stilted but natural. I could see it all happening and believe it. A true slice of life...
Very well done, taking this reader for an introspective ride into the MCs life history and bringing it full circle.
You did a great job of making the reader feel what your characters were feeling.
05/02/11
Loved the ending...well, beginning, middle and all else, too! :)
05/02/11
Congratulations for a rich portrayal of the timeless nature of memories and of the feelings that come along for the ride.
05/03/11
Sweet story of redemption and forgiveness. Nice job:)
05/03/11
You did a great job of keeping the suspense throughout. I love your message of forgiveness and pressing forward. Great work!
05/05/11
There is nothing like forgiveness to bring peace of mind. Many of us have regrets from the past.